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I was captivated, and your style felt like a unique combination of Thomas Pynchon, William Gibson, and Satoshi Kon (and the ending made me think of the end of Akiria). I love how you blended vivid description with subtle allusion, and the pacing, which mapped a slow, inevitable creep of Lillith, was well designed. I liked also when the core group began fragmenting with disagreement over Lilith—I think that’s true to life. And boy, if this is just the lead-in…very impressive. I’m looking forward to more!

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